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DISCLAMER: The abductor in this story in no way represents me or expresses my personal desires. Neither do I condone his actions in any way. This guy scares me, and I wrote him.

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Yet more of the crazy abductor and his victim. Time goes on, and he continues to try and prove his devotion.

I wonder what crosses the border between Mature (Warning) and Mature (Strict)? Since there really isn't anything sexual going on with the abductor here, does it simply count as being disturbed, but not adult? I'll change it if need be, since I do refer to such things as shock collars and a chasity belt.

You know, I find it odd. It's obvious with a quick perusal of my favorites that I like Bondage. Yet, I find I can't enjoy my stories that way. I use them to explore themes I'm intrigued by, but I don't like them as fetish fodder. Doubly so in this story, where I don't even really like what's going on. I just had the idea and had to put it to paper. I wonder why that is?

Either way, comments and criticism always welcome.
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This is definitely something... The fact that her despair isn't described here made it bearable to read. Otherwise I don't think I'd be able to finish reading it.

And I don't mean bearable with respect to the quality of the story. It was very well written, but there in lies the problem, since I very easily get an empathic reaction to a main character and really "get into the story", so if you would have described the girl's side with the same detail, I'd have had to put away the story to protect my mental health 😅